Monaro and Issac O both worked hard to meet our goals. They needed to remember to include a 'what' sentence, add some details and talk about how they felt.
We are very proud of how much you have both improved with your writing! Keep up the great work!
Both Monaro and Kasslin have worked hard with their writing. Their goals were to write more than sentence, thinking about including 'what they wanted to tell us about', what it looked like or what they saw and how they felt.